Storming the Gate – a 100 word story
Storming the Gate
by M.T. Decker
“Pete, I know it looks imposing, but I’m telling you we can sneak in…”
Peter gave Pablo a dubious look and shook his head. “I don’t think we can sneak in, and if you ask me, we shouldn’t. It looks like a fortress because it is a fortress: a mighty fortress.”
Much to Peter’s chagrin, Pablo wasn’t giving up.
“We could climb the tree next to it and use that to get on the roof, then it’s just a question of shimmying up the drain pipe…”
Peter sighed. “Do you really think that’s the best way to get into heaven?”
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Dear M. T.,
Why on earth would anyone try to sneak into heaven? That mystery aside, I loved your story and extend to you a hearty, ‘Welcome to the party, Pal!’ from all of us here at FF.